This article title, "Laser Blasts Jeep From The Air" is a fine example of screwing up sentence ordering. The title, as written, implies that a Jeep was miraculously traveling through the air when a laser blasted it out of the sky.
The title should have been "Airborne Laser Blasts Jeep."
Honestly, after seeing the underwhelming footage, I would have preferred a story about flying Jeeps.
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Friday, 2 October 2009
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